More Revisions

Took a final pass on the flash fiction. Spruced up a few parts and ended with a final tally of 498 words.


Spent the rest of the writing time revising the short story. This going to take a bit of work. Mixed tenses and too much passive voice.



3 Responses to “More Revisions”

  1. lonesome_crow Says:

    Good luck with it! Do you have a market in mind?

  2. olddarth Says:

    Mike I am writing it in response to the flash fiction contests Horror World runs each month. This month’s theme is Poison and the deadline is July 30th if you are interested. The contests are in the Writer’s Den forum.
    I am so used to working to a deadline that I find these really helpful. Condensing a story into 500 hundred words really helps my writing skills.
    Plus there is the possibility of instant gratification and some booty if you win!!

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